Here's the original:
And here's what I've done:
Do you think the extra text at the bottom is too much? Or like it doesn't flow? "Taste it all. All the chemicals."
I got a lot done today. Well, not any more so than other days, but I got it done a lot faster. So this evening has been more relaxed, which is nice. But I still have studying to do. I've finished rereading all the chapters and making notes. Now I have to actually make sure I know it. -_-
94. Are you outgoing or shy?
Shy, but I've become less so over the past year or so.
There are fights for being my best friend
- The Love Club, Lorde
Put a comma after the 'taste it all' but other than that it looks good!
ReplyDeleteI'm sure this is too late...or you took your bfflaat's advice...but I would have left the last line out. The top is excellent.
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